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THE GIRL NUR AND THE KING OF THE JINNS, SHAM'UNA
Chapter 1 — By Haruna Usman
Alhaji Hamidu, the son of Usman, was a man whom Allah had blessed with the gift of knowledge and the ability to apply it. He possessed deep wisdom, patience, trustworthiness, and a complete lack of arrogance. By all standards, he was living a comfortable and secure life.
His greatest fortune, however, was how Allah had blessed him with a righteous wife—the kind of woman who is incredibly rare to find in terms of her sound judgment, patience, beauty, and physical perfection. Her name was Ramlah.
The couple had both sons and daughters, but three of their eldest children stood out as exemplary. The eldest was named Idrisu; following him was Abubakar, whom they fondly called Habu; and then came Yahaya. All of them had acquired a solid education fitting their status.
What was truly wonderful was how these young men had inherited all the noble characters, virtues, and physical traits of their parents. Consequently, their behavior became a model for others, and their striking physical beauty became the talk of the town.
Experiencing a taste of youthful comfort and having attained a certain level of education, these young men reached a point in life where they desired nothing more than to venture out into the world to broaden their horizons and acquire further knowledge.
Ultimately, they made up their minds to journey out. Knowing the immense value of education, and fully trusting the upbringing and moral integrity of their children, their parents did not oppose this desire to travel in the slightest. In fact, before they departed, their father gave them a final piece of advice and a stern warning:
"O my children, the most important thing I want to remind you of and warn you about is this: wherever you find yourselves, maintain your trustworthiness. Always remember the sole reason you left home—which is knowledge; the ultimate guide of life."
The youths promised that, by Allah's grace, they would never forget.
On the other hand, there was Bashari—another intelligent, sensible boy who was both a neighbor and a close friend to the brothers. Because of the deep bond between them, he was fully involved in all the travel preparations. He also sought the permission of his own parents, and they granted it.
Thus, they were four in total.
After receiving prayers for good fortune and the profound blessings that parents traditionally bestow upon their children, the young men said their goodbyes to their community and hit the road.
They traveled for forty-two days until they reached a major crossroads where the path split into four distinct directions: East, West, South, and North. There, they stopped to deliberate.
Habu said, "I think we should separate from this point onward, with each person taking his own path. If we recall our father’s words from a few days ago, he mentioned that we would strive harder and become more resilient if we were not looking at each other."
Without any argument, they said their farewells and parted ways, though each of their hearts trembled with emotion.
The eldest, Idrisu, faced East; Habu headed North; Bashari took the path to the South; while Yahaya directed his steps toward the West. Each man went his own way.
IDRISU continued his journey for days on end without knowing exactly where he was headed. Traveling through night and day, he simply kept moving deeper into the unknown. The heavy beating of the rain became something his body grew entirely accustomed to.
But instead of seeing signs of a town or a village, he found himself plunging deeper into a vast, dense, untamed wilderness day after day. He crossed streams, waded through lakes, and maneuvered between rocky mountains. He constantly encountered all kinds of wild animals, both large and small—some he recognized or had heard stories about, and others whose existence he had never even imagined. He heard nothing but the roaring of lions, leopards, elephants, and other beasts, but Allah continually protected him. Some of the strange cries and roars were completely unfamiliar to him, and he couldn't tell what kind of creatures were making them, but he simply kept moving forward, blind to his ultimate destination.
When the provisions he had brought from home finally ran out, wild fruits became his sole source of sustenance. He eventually arrived in a thick, primordial forest where there was absolutely no sign that a human being had ever set foot. Suddenly, in the deep silence of the wilderness, he heard the distinct neighing of a horse. He headed toward the sound, looking through the trees until his suspicion was confirmed: it was indeed a horse. Idrisu had never seen a horse of such breathtaking beauty in his entire life.
In his heart, he felt certain that he would now find help or information, as this was a clear sign that humans might be nearby.
He searched everywhere to see if the horse's owner was around, but to his amazement, there wasn't a single trace of anyone. Moving closer, he discovered that the spreading, tangled roots of a massive, creeping tree on the ground had tightly ensnared the horse's leg, and the animal was unable to free itself. Seeing Idrisu approach, the horse began to thrash and kick wildly, but Idrisu gently coaxed and calmed it, moving closer at a slow, deliberate pace. He went and gathered some fresh, green grass and offered it to the horse to show he meant no harm. Gradually, he managed to soothe the animal until he could pat it.
Idrisu drew a knife from his sheath, carefully cut away the tangled roots, and gently pulled the leg free. Discovering that the leg was slightly injured, he wasted no time; he tore a piece of his own clothing and wrapped it as a bandage. The horse clearly understood that it was being helped, so it completely relaxed. Idrisu built a small temporary hut at the spot and spent several days nursing the horse until Allah restored it to perfect health.
Just like that, he had gained a mount. Before long, he faced no difficulty riding or controlling it; whatever command he gave, the horse obeyed without hesitation.
It is hard to exaggerate the sheer beauty of this horse—no matter how many beautiful horses a person might have seen in their life, this one surpassed them all. It was well-fed, pure white, and possessed a majestic aura. If you were lucky enough to lay eyes on it, you would instantly be captivated by its charm.
Before long, Idrisu began to ponder what name to give this magnificent stallion. Deep in thought, he suddenly remembered a specific word his father had used when they were leaving home—his father's reminder that knowledge is the guide of life. He patted the horse's neck and said, "Your name is Jagora (The Guide)." Instantly, the horse let out a unique, joyful neigh, as if it perfectly understood the meaning behind the name.
After both of them had fully rested, Idrisu said to Jagora, "It is time for us to leave this place and head wherever Allah guides us." Daily life had caused him to develop a habit of speaking to his horse just as one would speak to a fellow human being.
Without a saddle, he mounted Jagora and plunged back into the wilderness, giving the horse free rein to take him wherever it pleased; wherever the horse directed its steps, Idrisu did not pull the reins.
Before he realized it, they arrived at the edge of a magnificent garden nestled deep within the thick forest. In all his time on earth, he had never dreamed of or heard stories about a place so captivating. It was filled with deeply fragrant flowers of various vibrant colors. A beautiful stream flowed back and forth in a delightful manner, and the trees bore an abundance of diverse fruits. Birds perched on branches, singing melodies and creating a variety of sounds that brought absolute peace to the soul. In short, the moment you laid eyes on this garden, the very first thought that would cross your mind was, "O Allah, grant us Paradise."
Yet, the garden held a wondrous mystery. The dense forest surrounding it showed no signs of sand or manicured paths; it was entirely composed of wild trees, thorns, thickets, rocks, and rough streams. But this garden stood out completely. It features pristine white sand, embedded with small, rounded crystalline stones that radiated light like lamps. From a single glance, you knew this was not the handiwork of man, but rather that of a Jinn.
At the far edge of the garden, two beautiful rooms could be glimpsed—one large and one small—both painted in delightfully vibrant colors. Between the rooms and the garden flowed a stunningly clear stream. Inside the water, beautiful fish of various species and colors could be seen swimming vividly. Crossing the stream, Idrisu left Jagora under the shade of a tree and headed directly toward the large room. He called out the Islamic greeting, "Assalamu alaikum (Peace be upon you)." To his surprise, a voice answered from within, "Wa’alaikumus salamu (And upon you be peace), come inside."
Upon entering, he discovered that the room was massive, resembling a small house. Inside sat an elderly man of advanced years, with a long, flowing beard, sideburns, and hair that was pure, beautiful white. Just looking at him, you could tell he possessed a divine dignity due to the intense aura and charisma of his face. He was seated upon a white ram-skin rug, surrounded by a vast, towering collection of various educational books.
Idrisu approached him respectfully and greeted him in a soft, polite voice. The old man looked at him, instantly observing that he was a handsome, composed young man who exuded tranquility. He permitted him to sit and then asked, "O young man, what is your name? Where do you come from? What are you seeking, and where are you headed?"
Calmly, Idrisu replied, "My name is Idrisu, the son of Hamidu. I come from our town, Dutsen-ruga, in search of knowledge. I have simply been traveling without knowing my exact destination until Allah brought me here."
After sharing his background with the old man, Idrisu respectfully inquired, "O honorable elder, what is your own story? What is the tale behind your solitary existence in this dense wilderness? And what is the history of this wondrous garden?"
The elder replied, "O Idrisu, I want you to know that my name is Ibrahim, the son of Yahaya. As for the story of my presence here and the tale of this garden, do not ask me about it ever again. I want to propose something to you: if you agree to my terms, I will teach you exactly what you set out to find—knowledge. If you do not agree, then you may continue on your journey."
Idrisu responded, "May Allah forgive you, master, please tell me the terms. If it is something I can agree to, I will accept; if it is something beyond my capability, I will depart."
The elder, Ibrahim, said, "O Idrisu, people count me among the most famous scholars of this era because of the immense wealth of knowledge Allah has blessed me with." He continued his explanation, "O son of Hamidu, I have been in this deep forest for a very long time. However, my history within it and the story of this location itself is incredibly long; you cannot hear it now, but perhaps in the future."
"The first condition I will give you is this: from this moment on, no matter what you see, you must never ask questions. The second condition is regarding a well you must have passed when you were coming in, correct? What I want you to do is go every single day, draw water from that small stream over there, and pour it into the well. You must do this without fail for the duration of one full year. And do not forget what I told you—no questions. Simply execute what I command. There is a room over there; that is where you will sleep. Do not dare to oversleep throughout this year to the point that I wake up and go outside before you. As for the other things you will encounter when night falls, you will have to figure out how to navigate them yourself."
"If you accept these conditions, I will tutor you for a full year. Do not worry about food; that will be provided. I observed your arrival from afar riding that exceptional horse. Just from the way it carries itself, any observant eye can tell it possesses a special, extraordinary gift—it is no ordinary horse. Yet, here you are, controlling it as you please, and it has submitted to your authority. That is why I sense that great success lies ahead in your destiny. I urge you to treat it with immense respect, for it will provide you with great assistance."
The elder continued to advise Idrisu, "O my son, without a doubt, you will face many struggles and trials on your journey."
Hearing the elder’s words, Idrisu, the son of Hamidu, replied, "O honorable elder, I have heard everything you said, and I accept and agree to your terms. However, I place my trust in you, and I hope you will not deceive me. You have forbidden me from asking questions; were it not for that, I have so many questions for which I desperately need answers from you."
The elder replied, "No, do not ask. In due time, you will come to know everything."
Idrisu sought a quick clarification, "When we are studying, if something becomes confusing or unclear to me, am I forbidden from asking about it?"
The elder answered, "No, that is an exception. When it comes to the field of learning, study without questions simply becomes a mere story."
The elder and grand scholar, Ibrahim, further added, "O beautiful young man, if it is truly knowledge you came seeking, then you have found it, provided you uphold these rules. After you complete your one year of study with me, you will proceed to continue your education under others. But before you meet them, a monumental task awaits you."
Idrisu intensely wanted to know what the elder meant by this, but remembering the rule against asking questions, he remained silent. He simply told the elder, "Without a doubt, I will do my absolute best to observe the rules you have set for me, by Allah's grace."
With a cheerful demeanor, the elder said, "Very well. Go to that room over there, step inside, and see it; that is where you will sleep. There is a small shed attached to the room where you can tether your horse. This room is equipped with everything a human being could possibly need. If Allah spares our lives until tomorrow, you will begin drawing water from the stream and pouring it into the well. Do not forget that you must pour exactly ten clay pots of water every day. The moment you finish, come directly to me so we can begin our studies."
Idrisu thanked the scholar and headed toward the room. Upon entering, he found a bed, a chair, and every amenity for a comfortable life, far exceeding his expectations. He sat on the edge of the bed, deeply pondering their conversation—especially the strange task of pouring water into a well instead of drawing water out of it. Yet, he was forbidden from asking questions. There was also the matter of the wondrous garden, and the fact that no other human being existed in this place besides this single old man. All of it was shrouded in the rule of silence.
At the very first light of dawn, he picked up a clay pot and began drawing water from the stream, pouring it into the well as commanded, until he had poured exactly ten pots.
After completing his task, he went to his horse, Jagora, and patted it. The horse let out a soft neigh that sounded like a morning greeting before turning to head into the forest to graze on its own. Idrisu then directed his steps to the master's room, called out his greeting, and was granted permission to enter. He greeted the scholar respectfully, and the master replied with a warm, affectionate smile.
Idrisu said, "I have poured the water."
The elder replied, "I already know."
Idrisu wondered how the master could possibly know since he hadn't stepped outside, but there was no opportunity to ask.
As soon as they finished breakfast, Sheikh Ibrahim said, "O Idrisu, before we begin, I want you to give me the reason why you desire to acquire knowledge at all costs. Or, in short, tell me about the importance of knowledge."
Idrisu replied, "O honorable teacher, I am merely a youth; therefore, I know that what I comprehend regarding the deep importance and benefit of knowledge is very little. Knowledge brings a person out of darkness and guides them toward the light. If you have knowledge, you possess dignity. No matter your power, wealth, or charisma, if you lack knowledge, the only difference between you and a donkey is physical form—you are shaped as a human, while its name is a donkey."
"Knowledge is a blanket; whoever wraps themselves in it will never be humiliated. You will see the child of a poor man, but so long as he acquires knowledge, he becomes a great man whom people treat with immense respect, even holding leadership positions that the local village head could never dream of. Knowledge is the ultimate weapon; even when you journey to the afterlife, it goes with you. As you walk, it guides your life. Wherever you enter, you see clearly. Even if your physical eyes do not open, you are not blind; for as long as you possess knowledge, you are far better off than an ignorant person whose eyes are wide open a hundred times over. This is a fraction of what I know regarding the importance of knowledge."
When Sheikh Ibrahim heard the words of the young Idrisu, he said, "Indeed, you have mentioned a small part of the vast importance of knowledge. Nevertheless, you have done well, and gradually, you will continue to see and understand its deep significance. Now, you must further understand that knowledge is the sword that cuts down ignorance. If you want to experience the worst misery of this world, live in ignorance. Just as knowledge acts as a guide, ignorance is also a powerful guide—but a guide toward destruction."
"Ignorance is the crown of arrogance. An ignorant person wounds themselves without even realizing it. In short, if I continue to speak to you about ignorance, we would spend days on end talking about it. For now, let us proceed with our studies."
When the time for prayer arrived, they rose to perform it, ate their meals, and returned directly to their learning. They did not pause except for the Asr afternoon prayer, continuing until just before the Maghrib evening prayer, at which point the scholar granted his student the opportunity to ask questions specifically regarding the day's lessons. From there, they prayed and ate, concluding just as the time for the Isha night prayer commenced. After performing the prayer, the elder said, "We are finished for today. Now, hurry back to your room, and do not dare return to this room of mine until tomorrow morning. And as I have repeatedly emphasized to you: no matter what you see, do not dare ask me any questions."
Idrisu said his goodbyes and left. Upon entering his room, he plunged into deep thought, marveling at the mysterious things surrounding this elder—especially how food magically arrived for them. There was no other human being nearby, let alone anyone seen bringing it, yet he was forbidden from asking.
He finished his musings and began reviewing the lessons he had taken. In the midst of his studies, he suddenly heard the elder calling out from outside his door. He hurried out immediately.
The elder said, "I forgot to tell you: make sure to pay close attention to your horse. Whenever you hear it neighing, it is without a doubt signaling something to you, so pay attention."
Idrisu replied, "Thank you, master. By Allah's grace, I will pay attention."
The elder returned to his quarters, leaving Idrisu to ponder, "Am I living in a city of Jinns? I am told not to ask questions. Warm, fresh food appears for us to eat, yet I don't see anyone cooking it, and I cannot ask. My horse's neighing is said to be a sign, yet I cannot inquire. And whatever I see during the night, I must not question it."
"To be honest, if this old man weren't a devout Muslim, I would have fled this place long ago. But I am certain he will not deceive me based on all indications... So, I will stay and continue to obey his commands."
He went inside, climbed onto his bed, and lay down to sleep.
Late in the night, after a deep sleep had overcome him, he suddenly heard singing as if in a dream. The voice was undeniably that of a woman, and it was incredibly beautiful. In his entire life, he had never heard singing and the strumming of a lute (molo) so sweet and enchanting.
He woke up with a start and opened his eyes, but the music and singing continued clearly, proving to him that this was reality, not a dream. In fact, it wasn't just a lute; other musical instruments were gently playing in harmony.
He rose and peered outside his room. To his amazement, the nearby garden had lit up with a breathtaking glow from various multi-colored lamps. Standing there were fourteen young maidens, all dressed in identical, beautiful attire. A fifteenth girl stood among them, dressed entirely differently, leading the song while the others melodiously answered her chorus.
This particular girl far surpassed the others in beauty, standing out just as the moon shines brightly among the stars. No matter the heights of a beauty queen, she could not match this maiden's perfection. Anyone with sight had never beheld such flawless beauty. No matter how indifferent a person claimed to be, laying eyes on her would instantly seize their thoughts. Your only luck would be if you had never seen her at all.
When she raised her voice in song and the others responded, Idrisu felt as though his soul would melt from pure, intoxicating pleasure.
Idrisu was certain that not even his wildest dreams had ever shown him a girl who came close to her level of beauty and physical perfection. The only words that escaped his lips were, "Glory be to the Lord of the Worlds. I am certain this girl is the Queen of Beauty among the Jinns."
As the girl began another song, Idrisu felt an overwhelming urge to stand up, cross the small stream separating them, and go directly to her. However, a voice of caution within him warned him against it, and he hesitated. But when she sang a melody whose sheer sweetness vibrated through the deepest recesses of his brain, he lost all self-control. He stood up, walked outside, and headed straight toward them. Just as he was looking for a spot along the bank to cross the stream, Jagora suddenly let out a sharp, piercing neigh. Instantly, his senses snapped back to reality, and he remembered that his horse's neighing was a direct warning sign. Realizing that approaching these maidens would bring him nothing but grave danger, he turned back, entered his room, and continued to listen to their songs from a safe distance.
As dawn drew near, absolute silence fell. He stood up and peered outside, but saw that everyone had vanished. All the maidens had disappeared along with the lights, leaving only the empty garden behind.
Astonishment gripped him once more. "I knew from the start that those girls were Jinns." The moment he lay back down, a heavy, profound sleep overcame him, lasting until his horse came and neighed loudly twice. He woke up instantly, performed his prayers, and begged Allah for success and protection. And in a hurry...
2. Description of the Original Text
- Title: Yarinya Nur da Sarkin Aljanu Sham’una (The Girl Nur and the King of the Jinns, Sham'una).
- Author: Haruna Usman.
- Genre: Hausa Fantasy/Epic Literature (Littattafan Yaki da Sifiri / Jinn Lore).
- Language & Style: Classic prose Hausa mixed with deep, traditional philosophical dialogue. It prominently features themes of moral upbringing (tarbiyya), Islamic cultural settings (Dutsen-ruga, traditional greetings, Islamic scholars), and supernatural elements drawn from regional folklore regarding the unseen world (Aljanu).
Source/Platform Note: The text features metadata tags (Www.bankinhausanovels.com.ng) indicating its status as a digitally distributed piece within the contemporary Northern Nigerian online reading space.
3. Structural Analysis
Characterization
- Alhaji Hamidu & Ramlah: Positioned as the ideal parental unit. Hamidu represents implemented knowledge (ilmi da aiki da shi) and humility, while Ramlah represents physical and moral perfection.
- The Three Brothers & Bashari: Idrisu, Habu, Yahaya, and their neighbor Bashari represent the untainted, eager youth. They are physically beautiful and have inherited their parents' perfect traits.
- Idrisu: The protagonist of this segment. He is respectful, resilient, possesses deep insights into the value of knowledge, but is still vulnerable to magical enchantments.
- Jagora (The Stallion): A supernatural, highly intelligent white horse. It acts as a animal companion, protector, and intuitive guide.
- Sheikh Ibrahim dan Yahaya: The classical trope of the hidden grandmaster or sage living isolated in a mystical forest. He possesses immense esoteric knowledge and sets strict, seemingly illogical rules to test obedience.
The Maiden (Jinn Princess/Queen): The epitome of supernatural beauty who weaponizes music and allure.
Core Motifs & Tropes
- The Journey for Knowledge (Neman Ilmi): A deeply rooted Islamic and cultural motif in West Africa where youths travel far from home, facing trials to study under renowned scholars.
- The Crossroads: A classic mythological trope symbolizing destiny, choice, and individual testing. The separation ensures that each brother must survive on his own merit.
- The Forbidden Question Rule: A classic folklore mechanism (similar to Sufi allegories or the Quranic story of Musa and Al-Khidr) where the student must blindly obey the master's enigmatic deeds without questioning them.
Symmetrical Absurdity: Pouring water into a well instead of drawing it out serves as a psychological or spiritual test of obedience and discipline over logic.
4. Summary of Chapter 1
Chapter 1 introduces Alhaji Hamidu and his wife Ramlah from the town of Dutsen-ruga, who raise three exceptionally virtuous and handsome sons: Idrisu, Habu, and Yahaya. Desiring to explore the world and advance their education, the brothers, joined by their close neighbor Bashari, seek and receive their parents' blessings. Their father sends them off with a vital reminder that knowledge is the ultimate guide of life.
After traveling for forty-two days, the four youths reach a four-way crossroads. To maximize their individual growth, they decide to separate, each taking a different cardinal direction; the eldest, Idrisu, travels East.
Idrisu's solo journey takes him through a brutal, beast-infested wilderness. When his food runs out, he survives on wild fruits. He eventually discovers and rescues a majestic white horse trapped in heavy tree roots. He nurses the horse back to health, masters riding it, and names it Jagora (The Guide), recalling his father's words.
Jagora automatically guides Idrisu to an impossibly beautiful, magically lit garden hidden deep in the rough forest. There, Idrisu meets an ancient, charismatic Islamic scholar named Sheikh Ibrahim dan Yahaya, who lives alone surrounded by books. The Sheikh offers to teach Idrisu for a year under strict conditions: Idrisu must never ask questions about anything he observes, he must wake up before the Sheikh every morning, and he must carry ten pots of water from the stream into a well daily. Idrisu readily accepts the terms.
During their first day, Idrisu impresses the Sheikh with a profound discourse on how knowledge grants human dignity, contrasting it with the destructive nature of ignorance. That night, Idrisu is awakened by enchanting music and witnesses fifteen incredibly beautiful Jinn maidens singing in the garden. Overwhelmed by the beauty of the lead maiden, Idrisu loses control and attempts to cross the stream to join them. However, a warning neigh from his horse, Jagora, snaps him back to reality, saving him from a potentially fatal trap. He retreats to his room, fully realizing he is dealing with the supernatural world of the Jinns.